Know Your Readers and Define Your Promise
Homeowners seek comfort, health, and lower bills; students want frameworks; policymakers need clarity and outcomes; practitioners look for replicable details. Name the audience in your intro, reflect their goals, and ask a question that invites comments, like which comfort metric matters most to them.
Know Your Readers and Define Your Promise
Before drafting, outline a precise promise: in eight minutes, readers will learn how this school cut cooling loads by forty percent using shading, massing, and nighttime ventilation. Keep that promise visible while writing, and invite readers to tell you if you met it.